Antigone Cadmus

Hey, Night! Chapter four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating reading my book and cleaning my room. Very awkwardly worded. How about: "While ...

Hey, JujuMayuDreamer14! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Fight every with every ounce of your strength. This makes no sense. Is it supposed to be a question: ...

Yes! I got here before all the nit-picks were taken! *dances like a three year old* He was very handsome for his age But, he's a vampire? Shouldn't age not ...

Helllllllllloooo, Evi! Here as requested! Keep in mind, my poetry knowledge is limited to ancient epic poetry like Homer and Virgil. ^_^ Not sure if 'Lyric' is the right forum ...

Another way to make a bad impression: Talking back to a junior moderator. *points at above posts* ^_^ Oh by the the way NO PLAUGERISING, i assume you are all ...

Hey, Lord Monster! Welcome to YWS! It's a great place to get critique for your work, so you should return the favor! You should try to post two reviews of ...

Ah. The edited version. ^_^ We rode the bike at city speed limits. I passed directions to Adam via the microphones in our helmets and ground my teeth over the ...

Hey, Cult Follower of Stephanie Meyer! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Wow. You really need to re-educate yourself about commas. After a comma add a space. ...

Hello again, evil_kookies! Hmmm... you still need to complete three more reviews of others' work to stick to the 2:1 ratio. ^_^ But that was when she looked down at ...

Well that was a complete waste of points! Make sure you edit this and add more. It wasn't bad, but there was hardly any thing there. Just a list of ...

Hey, Cindy! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! Uhm, this piece doesn't really look like it belongs in Action/Adventure Fiction. I believe it would be better suited for a forum ...

Hey, Becki W! Here as requested. ^_^ Sorry for taking so long! I'll review this even though it goes against my rules (nothing over three pages). This is four, so ...

Hey, mkjohns! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today! Whoa. There are way too many errors here to do a line by line. Your major error is having several ...

Back for Chapter Three, mhmmcolleenx0! “Chase what the hell was that?” Comma after Chase. Randy walking out the door his lip was bleeding and his eyes were fierce. Everything after ...

Here as requested, Nutty! Eek... I'm nervous to review your work... it's immaculate! I'll try! ^_^ The stars span in the night sky Something about this doesn't make sense. Not ...